All glories to Srila Prabhupada. Please accept my humble obeisances. Reading the Prabhupada Connect version of Radharani Talks to a Bumblebee i got inspired to check the translation against prabhupadabooks.com. There may be other discrepancies but this one stood out for me and i wanted to share what i found.
This is Prabhupada Connect version:
I can see on your mustaches the red powder of kuṅkuma which was smeared on the flower garland of Kṛṣṇa while it was pressed against the breasts of some other girl who is My competitor.
This is prabhupadabooks.com version (which i believe is the version Srila Prabhupada left us with and told us not to change).
I have seen on your moustaches the red powder of kuṅkuma, which was smeared on the flower garland of Kṛṣṇa while He was pressing the breast of some other girl who is My competitor.
Hare Krishna. All glories to Srila Prabhupada
lowly servant in the service of Srila Prabhupada,
Rasamanjari Devi dasi
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Padmapani Prabhu is my high school buddy, and Editor of Prabhupada Connect. Exactitidue is not one of his greatest strengths. Frankly, the changed version is not different, but of course on principle there should be ZERO change, otherwise the inner mood can be changed.
I hesitate to over comment on people's posts, but lately it is slow, so better my semi-useless opinion than none, maybe?
Hare Krishna. All glories to Srila Prabhupada.
You are right, "the inner mood can be changed." Compare "while it was pressed against the breasts" to "while He was pressing the breast". Is the changed version not different?
We need to be careful of something. It's been noticed that with many bhaktas, 'old friend' somehow allows us to excuse overlooked principals given to us by our eternal friend and master, His Divine Grace Srila AC Bhaktivedanta Swami, Srila Prabhupada.
Probably he did not know the version he is sharing is changed from the final authorized one. How fortuitous that he is your old friend. He might appreciate it if you let him know his source is not the authorized Srila Prabhupada version. He might want to copy and paste from prabhupadabooks.com. It's just as easy as copying and pasting from wherever.
lowly servant in the service of Srila Prabhupada
Tamohara dasa said:
Lalita Sasti : Appearance of Sri Lalita Devi ! SRI SRI LALITASTAKAM by Srila Rupa Goswami 1. I offer my obeisances to Lalita devi, who has many wonderful qualities. She worships the perspiration of Sri Sri Radha-Mukunda's lotus feet and acts boldly, out of intense feelings of friendship for Them.
2. I offer my obeisances to Lalita devi, who has many wonderful qualities. Her face defeats the beauty of the ambrosial corona of the full moon, her eyes are like those of an alarmed deer and she is expert in the art of decorating Sri Radhika.
3. I offer my obeisances to Lalita devi, who has many wonderful qualities. She wears a wonderful silk dress colored like a peacock with outstretched feathers, as well as a nice blouse, and her complexion defeats the golden splendour of gorocana.
4. I offer my obeisances to Lalita devi, who has many wonderful qualities. She teaches Sri Radhika the art of a left-wing heroine saying: "Radhe! Firmly reject this shrewd son of the king of Vraja, O immoral girl! Listen! Don't be weak! I'm saying it for Your own good. Don't submit to Him!"
5. I offer my obeisances to Lalita devi, who has many wonderful qualities. Her eyes become red with anger if she sees the son of the king of Vraja cheating Sri Radhika even slightly, then she will promptly embarrass Him with her clever words.
6. I offer my obeisances to Lalita devi, who has many wonderful qualities. She is the abode of affection for the Queen of cowherders, Yasoda, she is the teacher of the art of friendship for all the sakhis and her love for Sri Radhika and Krsna is equal.
7. I offer my obeisances to Lalita devi, who has many wonderful qualities. She requests every girl in Vraja to join the party of Vrsabhanu's daughter and who fulfills all desires of that girl (or of Sri Radhika). 7a. I offer my obeisances to Lalita devi, who has many wonderful qualities. All her desires were at once fulfilled when she saw the path of Sri Radha in Vraja being blocked by a certain person.
8. I offer my obeisances to Lalita devi, who has many wonderful qualities. She always enjoys the festival of Radha and Vrajendrasuta's meeting and she is the chief of all Radha's dear girlfriends in Gokula
. 9. Anyone who recites these prayers praising Lalita's wonderful qualities with a pure vision will be lovingly counted amongst her own (friends or maidservants) by Sri Radhika, the brilliant desire vine of the family of the Lord of Kirtida (King Vrsabhanu). )
“He Rādhe! You are the Supreme Power and I am the Supreme Person. This is what has been determined in the Vedas. You are sarva-svarūpā (the feminine nature of all existence), I am sarva-svarūpa (the masculine nature of all). While I am tejo-rūpa (the effulgent masculine form), You are tejo-rūpiṇī (the effulgent feminine form). O beautiful one! When, by supreme yogic strength, I become the seed of everything, then You become the embodiment of all power and take form as all feminine forms. You are the mūla-prakṛti (the original force of Mother Nature) born from half of My self
. You are equal to Me in power, intelligence, knowledge, and spirit.”